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Sorry I'm critiqueing again. It's just that you're the only artist I watch that asks for critique! And I love critiqueing!

The folds on the clothing really make this a stand out piece. Your technique makes them look real but somehow.... painted with a pallet knife or really thick watercolours. The same goes for the feathers as well.

They're hair is beautiful, highly detailed... almost photographic! The double light on the hair is a wondrous effect too.

But, on L the light coming from the middle is a lot better represented than the blue from the outside. Its the same for Light but his red outside lighting is better done than the middle light.

Not only that but, something is off with the faces too. They are good on their own but the seem too small for their heads. And Light seems to not have enough chin.

The apple looks a little flat too but that might be because of the watermark.

The Death note and the ribbon on the sythe are fabulous.

Continue to do awesome artwork!
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